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Forgive me if this comes out wrong,
but I couldn't help but stare--
No, don't worry there's nothing on your face,
on your shirt, or in your hair.

I'm guessing you don't get approached often,
there's no need to defend your position;
I understand the society we're living in,
Full of shallow pricks and egotistical jerks--

I get it.

So spare me the details of the made-up story
I see you fumbling behind your eyes,
I'm not going to buy it, so chill, relax,
take another sip of your drink and I'll explain why

I'm here in the first place because I know
you're dying to know why a girl like me
(not saying I am anything special
but you don't get picked up either, so let me be)

has come to sit beside you and start up
a little conversation about relationships,
and staring, and how when I look at you
I feel giddy—like I drank three screwdrivers

and a beer (but I don't drink). I can't help but wonder
have we met before? No?
Because I feel like I recognize these hands,
and how they felt against the curves

of my body. And those eyes seem like
fields of barley and wheat, and I'm running
forever into a soul I need to meet--
But I keep getting lost—so help me.

Do you recognize this face at all?
Why do I feel like we go together
like Jack and Jill, went up a hill,
and made love under the stars forever?

Oh, that's not how it goes?
Well it could...
if you would just...
would you walk me home?
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Author's Comments

I might add more later. I got distracted by a certain sleepy somebody stumbling down the stairs...


Love you, Kevin. tehehe


(BTW, I would so pick you up if I saw you at a bar. ^.~)

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:iconpath-to-paradise:
It took me a while to figure it out, but I realized sometime during our relationship that you are the girl I always dreamed about falling in love with.

Love you, too, baby. *kiss*
:iconxelishiken:
Damn.. that's one hell of a way that I see things most of the time. I always see myself in the situation that you placed out there.. not exactly hot.. just the average joe.

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Then the world is doomed. Personally, as long as there are people who will not accept the way society is, there will be no peace. As long as there is no peace, there can only be destruction. Nothing in this world can stop oblivion. Not even death.
:icondarknessinromance:
I am in love with these words.
A smile crept upon my lips with every last part...this is stunning. And modern, but not immaturely so. And...amazing and so...real.

I like this, I love it... you're such an inspiration to me, y'know.

--
"The man that hath no music in himself,
Nor is not mov'd with concord of sweet sounds,
Is fit for treasons, stratagems, and spoils." - William Shakespeare
:iconredchevelle:
For some reason, the only thought that came to mind after the screwdriver bit was, "You look like I need another drink." Great way to beat off the lassies without using a stick.

By the way, WHY do broads go after me NOW that I'm taken? Seriously, What the hell?

--
This is the world we live in, and these are the hands we're given,
use them and let's start trying, to make it a place worth living in
:iconrarn-barn:
I love this one Cass! The rhythm works wonderfully,and it all rings true, even if it is a bit forward. ;P

--
Thanks to words, we have been able to rise above the brutes; and thanks to words, we have often sunk to the level of the demons. - Aldous Huxley
:iconcaptive-serenity:
I like being forward and to the point. No need to beat around the bush. hehe
:iconcaptive-serenity:
They go after you now because if you're taken, that means you're awesome. And girls want awesome. girls wouldn't be with a guy if they weren't awesome...
It's a vicious circle. Best to stay with the girl who originally saw you were awesome before the others saw you were awesome only because you were in a relationship. lol

w00t for awesome!
:iconcaptive-serenity:
YAY for smiles! My goal has been completed with this poem! off to the next challenge! which I dunno what it is yet, but I will figure it out...


I'm an inspiration? o.o
Wow...thanks -blush-
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Nothing wrong with being average! ^^ They satisfy 100% of the time. hehe

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