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for a day, could we close the blinds
and lie in bed? Tell stories of ships
and waves, and giant squids
under the covers, giggling,
tickling, and let sunlight turn to moonlight
once again.

Throw responsibility out the window
even though that we shouldn't
because love has overflowed
and destroyed reason
and we focus on instinct
instead.

I want you to take my hand
and force me to my feet,
we start to dance, slowly,
then closer, a bit faster,
until we forget there is music playing
but we keep going
because our bodies move so well as one.

To take away all your stresses,
your anger and your pain,
if only for a day,
would be a blessing to me...
someday I hope
to be the woman you and I
both wish I could be.

The potential is there
just need some time to grow,
but a part of me is afraid
that when the time to sprout
will be too late
and time has turned into a game
of cruel fate.

Will we wake tomorrow knowing today
we were still in love?
Or will there be a sense of doubt,
because we let opportunity slip on by,
like humans do, instead of seizing the chance,
we let other things triumph romance?

Is everything I give going to be enough?
Or is the end still yet to come?
Lets lie in bed
and pretend
that the world only exists
between you and me
and the wind, blowing the canvas
of our ship to a place of adventure and love.
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sometimes late at night
i lie awake and watch her sleeping
she lost in peaceful dreams
so i turn off the light
lay there in the dark
and the thought crosses my mind
if I never wake in the morning
would she ever doubt
the way I feel about her
in my heart?

if tomorrow never comes
will she know how much I loved her?
did I try in every way
to show her every day
that she's my only one....
and if my time on earth were through
and she must face this world without me
is the love that I gave her in the past
going to be enough to last
if tomorrow never comes?


semi-inspired by Ronan Keating's "If Tomorrow Never Comes."
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:iconpath-to-paradise:
Oh, goodness... lots of questions here. I'll have to look this over again when there are less distractions and noise. It was starting to drive me bonkers after the stressful day - how appropriate, huh? We'll have fun tonight. Looks like we're going to need to sort out dinner, as well!

Love you... I'll respond more thoroughly to you later, baby.
:iconskerd22:
Diggin' the first half.

I'm not a big fan of doubt in relationships, otherwise I'm sure I'd dig the second half too.

Anywho, well written.
:iconredchevelle:
Dispel your worries, Miss. There's no need for them :D

--
This is the world we live in, and these are the hands we're given,
use them and let's start trying, to make it a place worth living in
:iconxelishiken:
Bonkers, eh? Didn't know you had a cat jumping on your head... :P I think Harley is following you now.. He tends to watch over those this one cannot. Hope everything is well for you both and this one likes it when you both write.. compose a silent melody. It's nice.
:iconxshadow-dancerx:
A M A Z I N G <3

--
"I'll forget the world that I knew,
But I swear I won't forget you,
Oh if my voice could reach back through the past,
I'd whisper in your ear,
'Oh darling I wish you were here.' "

:heart: "Vanilla Twilight" Owl City. :heart:
:iconcaptive-serenity:
it's not a doubt of the relationship. every one has doubts about life..
it's more of a stupid fear...that suddenly things in my life have come together, and I am afraid that like things in the past, it's going to be taken away (ie...car accidents, sickness...etc) and if you knew the pattern of my life, it would be a little bit more understandable lol

I never doubt his love. ^^
but yay for compliment! hehe thanks.
:iconcaptive-serenity:
Awwwah...
well whenever you get to it. ^^

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